Looking för en kort historia om en man i en bar som tycker att utlänningar gömmer sig vid kanten av synen

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Jag läste en novell för ett dussintals år sedan i en novellsamling med ett gult lock. Jag kommer inte ihåg titeln eller författaren eller samlingens titel eller redaktör.

Historien handlade om en man - en detektiv som jag tror (inte säker) - som satt i en bar. Han började rastlös om en eventuell invandring i det mänskliga samhället.

Särskildheten var att utlänningar bara kunde ses ("sett" kan vara lite för stark, "framstående" kanske) i kanten av sin vision. Det vill säga att man inte kunde titta direkt på en utlänning, men bara utse en närvaro nästan vid sin sida.

Jag tror att historien började när berättaren kom in i baren, fortskred när han berättade för någon sin historia och slutade när han själv ser något som bekräftar sin teori.

... Eventuella idéer?

    
uppsättning Thrax 23.01.2017 09:33

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Jag läste en novell för ett dussintals år sedan i en kortfattad samling med ett gult lock.

Från din beskrivning låter det som "Look Now" , en kort historia genom Henry Kuttner (men se Addendum om författarskap längst ner i det här inlägget). Betraktar någon av dessa omslag känt? Det enda gula locket jag ser där finns på 1977-antologin Historien om Science Fiction Magazine, Vol . 3 1946-1955 ( Michael Ashley , red.) Som skulle ha har funnits någon tid när du läser det "ett dussin eller så år sedan". Historien finns tillgänglig på internetarkivet som originalpublikationen i mars 1948 Häftande historier , och som återtryckt i antologin Min bästa Science Fiction-berättelse och som en läsning på radiosystemet Mindwebs .

Historien handlade om en man - en detektiv som jag tror (inte säker) - som satt i en bar.

Det är en konversation mellan två killar i en bar:

The man in the brown suit was looking at himself in the mirror behind the bar. The reflection seemed to interest him even more deeply than the drink between his hands. He was paying only perfunctory attention to Lyman's attempts at conversation. This had been going on for perhaps fifteen minutes before he finally lifted his glass and took a deep swallow.

En av dem är en reporter:

"About the Martians. All this won't do us a bit of good if you don't listen. It may not anyway. The trick is to jump the gun—with proof. Convincing evidence. Nobody's ever been allowed to produce the evidence before. You are a reporter, aren't you?"

Holding his glass, the man in the brown suit nodded reluctantly.

Den andra verkar vara en uppfinnare:

"Well, I got my brain scrambled, in a way. I've been fooling around with supersonic detergents, trying to work out something marketable, you know. The gadget went wrong—from some standpoints. High-frequency waves, it was. They went through and through me. Should have been inaudible, but I could hear them, or rather—well, actually I could see them. That's what I mean about my brain being scrambled. And after that, I could see and hear the Martians. They've geared themselves so they work efficiently on ordinary brains, and mine isn't ordinary anymore. They can't hypnotize me, either. They can command me, but I needn't obey—now. I hope they don't suspect. Maybe they do. Yes, I guess they do."

Han började rastna om en eventuell invandring i det mänskliga samhället.

"Then you ought to be taking it all down on a piece of folded paper. I want everybody to know. The whole world. It's important. Terribly important. It explains everything. My life won't be safe unless I can pass along the information and make people believe it."

"Why won't your life be safe?"

"Because of the Martians, you fool. They own the world."

[. . . .]

"Wait," the man in brown objected. "Make sense, will you? They dress up in human skins and then sit around invisible?"

"Only now and then. The human skins are perfectly good imitations. Nobody can tell the difference. It's that third eye that gives them away. When they keep it closed, you'd never guess it was there. When they want to open it, they go invisible—like that. Fast. When I see somebody with a third eye, right in the middle of his forehead, I know he's a Martian and invisible, and I pretend not to notice him."

Särskilt var att utlänningar bara kunde ses ("sett" kan vara lite för stark, "framstående" kanske) i kanten av sin vision. Det vill säga att man inte kunde se direkt på en utlänning, men utesluta bara närvaro vid sin sida.

The brown-suited man nodded. He took up the prints and returned them to his watchcase. "I thought so, too. Only until tonight I couldn't be sure. I'd never seen one—fully—as you have. It isn't so much a matter of what you call getting your brain scrambled with supersonics as it is of just knowing where to look. But I've been seeing part of them all my life, and so has everybody. It's that little suggestion of movement you never catch except just at the edge of your vision, just out of the corner of your eye. Something that's almost there—and when you look fully at it, there's nothing. These photographs showed me the way. It's not easy to learn, but it can be done. We're conditioned to look directly at a thing—the particular thing we want to see clearly, whatever that is. Perhaps the Martians gave us that conditioning. When we see a movement at the edge of our range of vision, it's almost irresistible not to look directly at it. So it vanishes."

Jag tror att historien började när berättaren kom in i fältet,

Det finns ingen berättare i berättelsen, den berättas i den tredje personen.

Framsteg när han berättade för någon sin historia och slutade när han själv ser något som bekräftar sin teori.

Historien slutar med läsaren ser något som bekräftar teorin:

They shook hands firmly, facing each other in an endless second of final, decisive silence. Then the man in the brown suit turned abruptly and walked out of the bar.

Och sedan:

Lyman sat there. Between two wrinkles in his forehead there was a stir and a flicker of lashes unfurling. The third eye opened slowly and looked after the man in brown.

Addendum om författarskap. Henry Kuttner och hans fru Catherine Lucille Moore (som skrev som C. L. Moore) samarbetade famously på sitt skrivande. På Moores wikipedia sida läser vi:

Moore met Henry Kuttner, also a science fiction writer, in 1936 when he wrote her a fan letter under the impression that "C. L. Moore" was a man. They married in 1940 and thereafter wrote almost all of their stories in collaboration—under their own names and using the joint pseudonyms C. H. Liddell, Lawrence O'Donnell, and Lewis Padgett—most commonly the latter, a combination of their mothers' maiden names.

Från Kuttners Wikipedia-sida :

Kuttner was known for his literary prose and worked in close collaboration with his wife, C. L. Moore. They met through their association with the "Lovecraft Circle", a group of writers and fans who corresponded with H. P. Lovecraft. Their work together spanned the 1940s and 1950s and most of the work was credited to pseudonyms, mainly Lewis Padgett and Lawrence O'Donnell. Both freely admitted that one reason they worked so much together was because his page rate was higher than hers. In fact, several people have written or said that she wrote three stories which were published under his name. "Clash by Night" and The Portal in the Picture, also known as Beyond Earth's Gates, have both been alleged to have been written by her.

L. Sprague de Camp, who knew Kuttner and Moore well, has stated that their collaboration was so intensive that, after a story was completed, it was often impossible for either Kuttner or Moore to recall who had written which portions. According to de Camp, it was typical for either partner to break off from a story in mid-paragraph or even mid-sentence, with the latest page of the manuscript still in the typewriter. The other spouse would routinely continue the story where the first had left off. They alternated in this manner as many times as necessary until the story was finished.

Beträffande historien "Look Now Now" tar ISFDB ut det enbart till Kuttner. Men i 1949 antologin Min bästa Science Fiction Story (< a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Leo_Margulies"> Leo Margulies och Oscar J Vänner , eds.), Avslutar Kuttner sin introduktion till denna historia (tillgänglig på Internet Arkiv ) med raden:

Anyway, my wife wrote it.

Det verkar så troligt att C. L. Moore skrev en del eller hela historien "Look Now Now".

    
svaret ges 23.01.2017 10:07